Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day,I was on my way back home from school while I found a lime boy crying on the road.I stopped and asked him what is the matter,and he told me he couldn’t find his mom.Luckily,he remembered his mother's telephone number.So I called him immediately.Ten minute later,the boy saw his mom and became exciting.His mom was so much thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift,and I refused.At that time,I felt quite happily because I did something really good.

To my opinion,the world needs love and we should be willing to help others without expecting any repay.If we wanted repay,as matter of fact,a “thank-you” is enough.

Answer 1

【答案】1.while→when

2.is→was

3.called后的him→her

4.minute→minutes

5.exciting→excited

6.so后的much去掉

7.I refused前的and→but

8.happily→happy

9.To→In

10.matter前加a

【解析】1.句意：在放学回家的路上这时候发现一名小男孩在路边哭。was/were doing sth.---when--，正在做某事，这时候---，故把while→when。

2.句意：我停下来，问他怎么了。句子用一般过去时态，故把is→was 。

3.句意：我立刻给他妈妈打电话。故把called后的him→her。

4.句意：十分钟之后，可知名词用复数形式，答案为minute→minutes。

5.句意：男孩见到他的妈妈感到很兴奋。故把exciting→excited。

6.much不能修饰形容词，故把so后的much去掉。

7.句意：她想给我买一个小礼物，但是我拒绝了。故把I refused前的and→but。

8.句意：我感到非常高兴。形容词作表语，故把 happily→happy。

9.固定搭配：in one’s opinion以某人看来，故把 To→In。注意大写开头。

10.固定词组：as a matter of fact事实上，故在matter前加a。