Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am so exciting that I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson in our school, which left me deep impression.

When I entered into the classroom, my students began to make much noise. I stood on the platform not know what to do next. But soon I realized everything must be done. I asked the kids that liked English songs. They all say “Yes.” I sang a song I had practiced many times. To my great surprise, all the kids turned their attentions to my class.

From this experience I know however happens, we must stay calmly first and find a wise solution.

Answer 1

【答案】I am soexcitingthat I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first

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lesson in our school, which left methedeep impression.

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kidsthatthey liked English songs. They allsay“Yes.” I sang a song I had practised many

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times. To my great surprise, all the kids turned theirattentionsto my class.

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From this experience I knowhoweverhappens, we must staycalmlyfirst and find a wise

whatever calm

solution.

【解析】略