Question

假定你是西安某一中学高三学生李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到如下的一个帖子:

??? With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

请你回帖，要点如下： 

1. 同意并表示担忧，实际上，学生心理压力不可避免。

2. 列出某些学生心理焦虑的现象（如：担心考不好；缺乏自信心；容易发脾气等）；

3. 提出应该采取的对策（如积极态度和应对方法）。

注意：1. 可适当发挥；

    ? 2. 词数：不少于100字。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I can’t agree more with what you said. That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.

Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，先读懂这篇帖子，弄清帖子的内容是关于高三学生的考前压力的问题，再根据给出来的要点来阐述，题目有三个要点，但是不是很具体，考生要根据要点进行拓展发挥，不能有遗漏，内容一定要充实，这就要求增加了难度。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组和好的句子：tend to容易，往往会，because of因为， get along well with 和…相处好，As a matter of fact事实上, turn to 求助于，of vital importance至关重要的. I can’t agree more with what you said.这句话用了宾语从句，That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. 这句话用了主语从句，It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.这句话用给了主语从句和非限制性定语从句， Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night.这句话用了状语从句， With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.这句话用了with复合结构。还有范文中使用了First of all, Second, Last but not least,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达