Question

18．假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华．暑假将至，你校外籍教师Mr．Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游，请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信，为Mr．Smith提供旅游建议．
1．需要说明旅游线路．
2．告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况
注意：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
        2．词数：100-120之间； 
 3．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数．                  

Mr．Smith，
Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday…
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 Yours  Sincerely
   Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本文为书信．写信目的为：为外籍教师Mr．Smith提供旅游建议．
写作要点为：1．需要说明旅游线路．
2．告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
     Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday．On July 20，you are to take a train to Tai'an City to climb Mount Tai，on the top of which，if lucky，you'll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning．On July 23，you may take the train to Beijing．You can visit Tian'anmen Square in the afternoon．After it you can live in Beijing Hotel，Which will offer you various Chinese traditional food．Next day，I suggest you visit the Great Wall，the longest wall in the world．For the next four days，you can go to the Summer Palace，walk around and do some shopping．In the afternoon，you may return to Taiyuan by plane．
  I hope you have a pleasant journey!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考生需熟悉书信格式．考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．