Question

【题目】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中的一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：

个人情况：年龄，性别，学历

个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况

承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：120词左右

生词：申请 apply (v.) application (n.) 志愿者 volunteer

Dear sir/madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir/madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

I am an active boy of 22 years old,majoring at the English in PekingUniversity.Now I am in the grade of two.Except my studying time,I always take part in sports activities,such as football,basketball and so on.Besides,I can get along well with my classmates and friends,which I think will be helpful when I am doing my volunteer work.The last but not least,I am so familiar with the local situation that will be easier for me to finish my mission.

I promise if I become the member of the volunteer team,I would offer the service of the highest quality.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

申请信，首先要陈述写信夫人目的，提出申请；第二，简述自己的学历、背景及可能提供的能力范围，表示有能力进一步提供力所能的服务；第三，表示感激，希望得到回复。

【亮点说明】这是一篇正式语体的申请信，第一段，提出申请；第二段简述自身情况及学历、背景，本段条理较清晰，besides，last but not least的使用使结构更加清晰，将要求一一列举，而且使用了多种句式和大量短语，比如非定语从句的使用Besides,I can get along well with my classmates and friends,which I think will be helpful when I am doing my volunteer work以及短语take part in、 get along well with、 am so familiar with ；结尾段表示感激，希望得到回复。