Question

【题目】假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写( to scribble )和乱丢垃圾( to litter )的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100词左右的信。信中应包括以下内容：

1. 说明写信目的；

2. 对这些行为进行批评；

3. 提出建议。

注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句已给出，不计入总词数。

July 13, 2018

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Two.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】July 13, 2018

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I'mLi Hua，astudentfromClassOne，Senior Two. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：littering and scribbling.

It makes our school dirty and unpleasant and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yoursfaithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写( to scribble )和乱丢垃圾( to litter )的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100词左右的信。信中应包括以下内容：说明写信目的；对这些行为进行批评；提出建议。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：a student from Class One，Senior Two（来自高二一班的一名学生）；draw your attention to some improper behaviour（一些不适当的行为引起你的注意）；littering and scribbling（乱丢废物和乱涂）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。