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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When Mr and Mrs Smith went to theatre，they left their German dog to guard his home.When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang，the dog was waiting for them.Unfortunately，one of the burglars was dog－lover，and he quickly made friends with it.While the alarm was ringing，but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe，the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep.When the police arrived at twenty minutes later，the burglars had gone.The dog was proudly guarded the empty safe.When the first policeman entered into the room，it immediately attacked him，tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.

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【解析】1.theatre是可数单数名词，前面加冠词，此处是特指，应该用the.故加上the.

2.根据语境可知，句子的主语是they，把他们的狗留下看家。此处表示“他们的”家。故把his改为their.

3.breakinto与breakin都作“闯入;强行进入;破门而入”之意时的区别如下:breakinto是及物动词短语,后面要接宾语，此句后面没有宾语应该用break in.故把into改为in.

4.dog-lover是可数名词单数，此处是泛指，dog读音是以辅音开头，所以前面加上不定冠词a.故加上a.

5.句中While the alarm was ringing，but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe都是状语从句，句中“the alarm was ringing”与“the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry，worth over $10，000 from a safe”两个分句之间是并列关系，应该用and.故把but改为and.

6.此处表示躺下休息，用lie down，lie译为“躺”的过去式为lay.故把laid改为lay.

7.arrive at后面跟时间点表示到达的时间，此处twenty minutes later是时间状语，arrive不及物动词，作谓语，at多余。故把at省去。

8.主语the dog与guard之间是主动关系，此句用过去进行时，故把guarded改为guarding.

9.enter是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语，故把into省去。

10.tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg是and连接两个伴随状语，bite与逻辑主语dog之间是主动，应该用现在分词作状语，故把bit改为biting.