Question

17．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
每个人在生活中都有被错怪或冤枉的经历，请讲述一个你的故事并谈谈你当时的感受或看法．

Answer 1

分析 本文是开放式作文．讲述生活中被错怪或冤枉的一次经历并阐述感受或看法．
写作要点：描述经历，阐述想法．写作时人称用第一和第三人称．时态应该用一般现在时和一般过去时．重要短语：have a conversation with （值得信赖的同伴），moved on to …（转到…），to my surprise （使某人惊讶的是），disconcerting （使人窘迫的），refute（驳斥），focus on…（集中…），moot（无实际意义的…），in isolation（孤立地）．

解答 Recently，I had a conversation with a friend about a tax referendum．When my friend asked me to explain my position，I expressed my thoughts in at least four main points．We then moved on to other topics of conversation．（引出主题．）
To my surprise，a few days later，I got a message from him stating that he thought my view on the issue was disconcerting and went on refuting what he described as my view on the subject．【高分句型】
As I continued to read，my anger level started to rise．What he was talking about was not what I had said．He took my words out of context and formed an entire argument by focusing on one point which may seem moot in isolation．【高分句型】（举例）
No matter how you want to be seen，people will always mishear，misunderstand and misinterpret your words and your actions．【高分句型】But forgive them，for how can they understand in exactly the way you want them to？They are absolutely free to understand in the way they do．（总结升华）

点评 类似这种开放式作文可遵循以下写作步骤：首段：议论，引出主题，点出观点．第二段：记叙，举例子．第三段：议论，总结升华观点，回应开头．同时写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．