Question

11．请你改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．3．请在答题卡上指定的地方作答．
My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt，s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了作者的朋友Dick的故事．有一天，母亲带他和妹妹去阿姨家玩．阿姨给了Dick一个漂亮的蛋糕，让他分给妹妹吃．阿姨告诉Dick，绅士会把大的给别人．Dick想了一会后，他把蛋糕给了妹妹，让妹妹平分．

解答 My friend Dick was seven years old，and her sister Katherine was five．One day their mother take them to their aunt's to play while she went to the city∧buy some new clothes．They played for a hour，and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen．She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said，"Dick，cut this cake in half，and give one of the piece to your sister．But remembering to do it like a gentleman．""How do gentlemen do it"Dick asked．"They always give the bigger one piece to the other person，"answered his aunt．Dick thought out this for a few seconds．Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her，"Cut this cake in half，!Catherine．"
详解：
1．her改为his；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是Dick，要用表示男性的his来指代．
2．take改为took；时态错误．句意表达的是过去发生的动作，要用一般过去时态．
3．加to；非谓语动词错误．句中buy作目的状语，要用动词不定式来表示．
4．a改为an；冠词错误．句中hour是以元音开头的单词，要用不定冠词an来限定．
5．nicely改为nice；形容词错误．句中nice修饰名词cake，要用形容词形式．
6．piece改为pieces；名词错误．句中有one of修饰，表示其中之一，后面的名词要用复数．
7．remembering改为remember；句型结构错误．句意表达的是命令，是一个祈使句，要用动词原形．
8．one去掉；代词错误．句中the bigger修饰piece，表示最大的一块，one重复了．
9．out改为about；动词搭配错误．句中think out是想出…；句意表达的是思考，要用think about．
10．but改为and；连词错误．句意表达的是并列动作，不是转折．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．