Question

从英国来到北京的交换生Tom在语言交流和生活及学习习惯等方面遇到很多问题，写信给曾经在英国做交换生的好友李明表达了自己的烦恼和困惑。假如你是李明，请用英文给他回复一封Email。要点需包括如下内容：
1．安慰
2．鼓励
3．建议
注意：
1．词数：不少于100词；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I’m so sorry to hear about the problems you are faced with at present__________________
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Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Tom，
I'm so sorry to hear about the problems you are faced with at present，just as I used to be when I was in England．But don't worry．Time will smooth away all your difficulties．
It's natural for someone to meet with various problems when he first stays in a foreign country． Language problem，as you mentioned in your letter，is the first one．But I never doubt that you'll soon be able to use the language well enough，since you are a quick learner．Be sure to find any possible chance to practise your Chinese both at school and home．and this will benefit your lessons．And the second thing is usually the change of eating habits．Not everyone can get easily used to a different diet，so why not try cooking yourself? Maybe you'll enjoy doing so after a period of time．
Staying in a foreign country is in some way challenging，but it's interesting as well，isn't it? Enjoy your stay in China!
Yours，
Li Ming

解析试题分析：首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当遵循语言表述的经济原则，即用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。注意语气及句子的时态。因为这封信是给出对方一些建议，还要注意写作时的语气要客气，谦虚。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：注意使用一些过渡句或过渡词来使句子读起来流畅。但是要注意使用正确的时态，为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。