Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter给你发来一封电子邮件，信中讲述他和同学发生了冲突，心情很不好。请你写一封邮件对他进行劝告。内容必须包含以下三个方面：

1. 介绍和同学产生冲突的不良影响。

2. 分析发生冲突的主要原因。

3. 谈谈应如何处理好同学们之间的关系。

注意：1. 词数：100词左右；

2．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad

mood._______________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad mood. Now I want to say something about it.

Classmate conflicts often result from different attitudes towards some issues. If we fail to deal with these conflicts properly, they can affect our mood and even lead to serious results.

Then what should we do to avoid these conflicts? In my opinion, when this situation arises, we should keep a cool head and put ourselves in others’ shoes rather than get annoyed and lose temper. What’s more, learning the art of compromise can contribute a lot to a good relationship. I think you may try communicating with your classmate to clear up your misunderstanding and you may feel good.

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语deal with处理；rather than而不是；What’s more而且；I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad mood这个句子运用到非谓语动词；What’s more, learning the art of compromise can contribute a lot to a good relationship.这个句子运用到非为主动词做主语；I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you这个句子运用到be of+名词的结构；