Question

【题目】有的学者认为当前国内的“英语热”影响了母语学习。请就这一认识给某中学生英文报社投稿，阐明自己的观点。要点如下：

1．学英语的重要性（与人交往，获取信息，了解世界）

2．学汉语的首要性（母语的用途、意义）

3．自己的建议。

注意：1．词数：100词左右；

2．文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Recently some scholars think that “the rush of English learning” has influenced the learning of Chinese. As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. I’d like to share mine with you.

It’s known to all that English is the most widely-used language in the world. Learning English can help us to communicate with people from foreign countries. We can also get a lot of information through English , helping us to know more about the outside world.

But Chinese is our mother tongue . In China, we can’t go without it.We need to use it to communicate and do a lot of things. So we must, first of all, learn Chinese well.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：有的学者认为当前国内的“英语热”影响了母语学习。请就这一认识给某中学生英文报社投稿，阐明自己的观点。要点如下：1．学英语的重要性（与人交往，获取信息，了解世界）2．学汉语的首要性（母语的用途、意义）3．自己的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数：100词左右；2．文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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