Question

假如你是李华，打算明年去美国留学。一家美国网站专门为外国留学生提供住宿家庭的信息，因此你给他们发一封电子邮件，说明你的租房要求；

1. 提供单独的房间2. 房子的地点要远离市中心3. 免费提供生活用品（洗衣机、炊具等）4. 每月房租不超出100美元

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：住宿家庭 host family

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sir /Madam,

         I am going to study in the USA next year. I learn from your website that you can provide accommodation for overseas students, so I am writing to look for a host family. Here are my requirements.

         First, I’d like to have my own room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. Second, the flat should not be far away from the center of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals. Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than 100 pounds.

         Looking forward to your early reply.

                                                           Sincerely yours,

                                                               Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如provide sth. for sb.，would like to，be comfortable for，far away from, be convenient for sb. to do sth.，no more than, look forward to；where引导的非限定性定语从句；并注意了句子的衔接如：first，second，third，so，so that, Besides等等。

考点：提纲类写作