Question

14．请根据以下提示，并结合生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文．
Everyone should learn how to give first aid，which is vital．Sometimes proper first aid can mean the difference between life and death．
注意：
①无需写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
First aid is the king of medical care given to a victim of an accident or sudden sickness before any other help arrives．
急救是给予一个意外或突发疾病的受害者在他人到来之前活下来的医疗照护中的王者．
高分句型二：
 Faced with this situation，first of all，I asked Tom to sit down and made sure that he was bending forward slightly．
面对这种情况，首先，我让汤姆坐下来，让他微微向前弯腰．

解答 First aid is the king of medical care given to a victim of an accident or sudden sickness before any other help arrives（高分句型一）．I think that everybody should know how to give first aid，because it is very important in medical emergencies．
Last Sunday，Tom and I were playing basketball when his nose began to bleed．Faced with this situation，first of all，I asked Tom to sit down and made sure that he was bending forward slightly（高分句型二）．In the way，the blood ran out of his nose and didn't run down his throat．Then cautiously I squeezed his nose just below the bridge to stop the bleeding．
After a short time，the bleeding stopped．This experience shows that knowledge of first aid can make a difference．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．