Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的好朋友王新今天早晨上课时一直闷闷不乐，课间活动时也没出教室，只是呆坐在座位上。你主动向他了解情况，他却婉言谢绝。对此，你很担心。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，对他进行开导劝慰。

注意： 1、词数：100左右；

2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3、邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Xin,

I noticed that you always kept your head down and were not willing to answer questions in class this morning. During the break, you just stayed at your seat and didn’t go out as usual. I thought there must be something unhappy happening and went to talk with you. But you didn’t want to tell me all about it. I am very worried. Cheer up, my good friend! No matter what happens, you still have so many friends around you to help. You are not alone, so don’t force yourself to suffer so much. Let me know if you need any help.

Best wishes！

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于应用文写作，话题是学生日常生活中常碰到的情况。学生写作起来应该很容易。写作时要注意注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】语句精炼，衔接紧密，运用高级句子。I noticed that you always kept your head down使用宾语从句；I thought there must be something unhappy happening and went to talk with you.there be 句型和情态动词巧妙结合；No matter what happens, you still have so many friends around you to help.让步状语从句在句中体现；You are not alone, so don’t force yourself to suffer so much.并列句恰如其分；Let me know if you need any help.祈使句和条件句的运用把文章推向了高潮。