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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Have you ever been to Wuzhen? It is such beautiful a village that I have already visited it many times. Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6,000 years. Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams. Local people live old houses, and they are very friendly. During the day, you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams. The scene at night is attractively as well. There are many kind of round and square light. Every time I look at the pictures for which I took, I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!

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【解析】本文主要讲述了浙江嘉兴的乌镇以及作者去乌镇旅游的经历和感想。

第一处：考查so和such 的用法。“It is such beautiful a village ”，so+形容词/副词+(a/an)+(单数)复数可数名词／+that+从句，such+(a/an) +形容词/副词+单数可数名词。故将such 改为so。

第二处：考查固定用法。“ Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6, 000 years.”，be located in“位于”。在句中省略了be，located 在句中作状语。故将Locating改为Located。

第三处：“ Like much small towns in the southern area,”，much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词。故将much改为many。

第四处：“Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams.”，Like much small towns in the southern area是介词短语，作状语，主句要用it来代指前面提到的Wuzhen，that代指的是“那个，那”。故将that改为it。

第五处：“Local people live old houses,”，live表示“居住”是不及物动词，后面不能直接接名词，故在live后加in。

第六处：“ you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams.”，or前后的动词形式应保持一致。故将sitting 改为sit。

第七处：“ The scene at night is attractively as well.”，attractively是副词，副词不能作表语。故将attractively改为attractive。

第八处：考查名词单复数。“There are many kind of round and square light.”, many修饰可数名词复数。故将kind改为kinds。

第九处：“Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,”，which引导定语从句，修饰 the pictures，took the pictures表示“照照片”，不需要介词for。故将 for删去。

第十处：“I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!”，这里 amazing water village特指前文所说的乌镇，故将an改为the。