Question

10．高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼．请你依据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇英文演讲稿，并作为学生代表在班会课上发言．词数150左右．

烦恼	解决办法
外形不美	不必在意，关注内在美
朋友少，不被他人理解	多参加活动，多与别人交流
与父母有代沟，经常吵架	加强沟通，互相理解
学习成绩不好，压力大	？

注意：
 1．开头已写好，不记入词数；
2．语言通顺，结构严谨．
参考词汇：内在美 inner beauty    除去 get rid of
Boys and girls：
We high school students do have some growing pains，but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．      ．
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一个表格式的作文，．要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成文．对于中学生存在的烦恼可以逐条描述并逐条建议，然后用适当的连接词如：First，second，third，使文章思路清晰明了．
亮点句型一：Faced with this，we can find a proper time to have a heatrt-to-heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．本句中faced with this 是形容词在句中做状语，trying是现在分词做状语．
亮点句型二：It is necessary for us to communicate with our parents after school，telling them what we think or what we want to do in the future．句中it是形式主语动词不定式to communicate with our parents after school是真正的主语；现在分词telling在句中做状语．

解答 Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains，but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their body style and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not important at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．Second，some of us have fewer friends．I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good．We sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers or classmates．Faced with this，we can find a proper time to have a heatrt-to-heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（亮点句型一）Third，some of us often quarrel with our parents because of the generation gap between us．It is necessary for us to communicate with our parents after school，telling them what we think or what we want to do in the future．（亮点句型二） Last of all，we may fall behind others，which makes us stressed．Acturally we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently，full of determination．
That's all．Think you．

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．