Question

【题目】随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的家庭拥有了私家车。你们班同学就此现象展开了一次讨论，提出两种不同的观点和看法。假如你是赵凯，请你根据下表提供的信息，给《学生双语》报社写一封信，客观介绍这两种看法。

赞同者认为	反对者认为
1. 方便快捷舒适的 交通工具； 2. 反映出生活水平提高，国家富强； 3. 带动其它行业发展。	1. 废气污染严重； 2. 影响交通，导致更多事故，危及行人安全； 3. 停车问题日益突出。

注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已给出。 2. 词数：120左右。3. 参考词汇：危及endanger

范文：

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

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In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

Yours

Zhao Kai

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

With the improvement of people’s living conditions, more and more families have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car, as a car provides convenient, fast and comfortable transport. Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. Thirdly, the fact that people buy cars makes other industries develop faster.

However, some other students have a different opinion. They think that cars give off waste gas and make the air polluted. They also said that too many cars would cause traffic jams, lead to more accidents and endanger people’’s lives. Finally, they said that parking is another big problem.

In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be good for 对……有好处；With the improvement of随着……的发展；give off发出；lead to导致；Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. 等以提升文章的档次分。本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。这个句子show 有两个宾语从句，第二个宾语从句的that是不可省略的；In short, people should think twice before buying a car这个句子运用非谓语动词。