Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In the past few month, every morning and evening, many people gathered to dance in our community square, which is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought inconvenience. I couldn’t rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they shortened the dance time and reduce the music noise. Only by this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight, they adopted my suggestion.

Answer 1

【答案】1. In the past few month... month→months

2. ... many people gathered ... gathered前面加have

3. ... but the long-time dancing... 删掉but

4. ... noise causing by the loudspeaker ... causing→caused

5. ... made me terrible upset ... terrible→terribly

6. ... such sleepy ... such→so

7. To solve a problem ... a→the

8. ... they shortened the dance time shortened → shorten

9. ... by this way ... by→in

10. To their delight their→my

【解析】１.固定用法：In the past few monthｓ在最近几年里，用名词复数形式，故把 month → months。

２. 固定用法：In the past few monthｓ在最近几年里，句子使用现在完成时态，many people是句子主语，故在gathered前面加have。

３. Although在句中不和ｂｕｔ出现在同一句中，故把but the long-time dancing... 中的but去掉。

４.句意：长时间的跳舞和喇叭引起的大噪音真正带来不便。此处是过去分词做后置定语，故把 causing → caused。

５.副词修饰形容词，故把terrible → terribly。

６. ｓleepy是形容词，因为ｓｏ修饰形容词或副词，故把such → so。

７.句意：为了解决这个问题。此处表示特指，故把To solve a problem 中的 a → the。

８. Suggest后面的宾语从句用ｓｈｏｕｌｄ＋动词原形，其中ｓｈｏｕｌｄ可以省略，故把shortened → shorten。

９.句意：只有用这种方法他们才能开心，让其他人享受生活。ｉｎ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｗａｙ用这种方法，故把by → in。

１０.句意：使我开心的是他们采纳了建议。故把To their delight 中的 their → my。