Question

请你针对以下现象给某英文报社投稿, 谈谈你的看法。

 

现状	现在的父母都望子成龙, 他们要求自己的孩子除了学习以外，还要学习很多课程
支持	培养各种兴趣，补充课内学习的知识
反对	业余时间排得满满的, 这给孩子加重了负担, 不利于其健康成长
自己观点	……

注意: 1. 词数: 100左右; 2. 生词: calligraphy 书法。

At present, with the development of our society, many parents in China expect their children to keep up with this rapid change and be well prepared for the future.

                                                                        

                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

At present, with the development of our society, many parents in China expect their children to keep up with this rapid change and be well prepared for the future. Besides their regular studies at school, children are asked to attend all kinds of other classes, such as piano class, dance class, calligraphy class, and so on.

Some believe that extra courses can contribute to the students’ interests in different fields and make up for the knowledge learned in school.

While others argue that this practice lays a heavy burden on their shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play.

I believe parents should let children develop their talents through their own choices and interests and give them enough time and space to learn what they want. Only in this way can the children live happy lives.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。比如First of all，…Secondly,…As a result, Besides,…. For one thing, …For another,…What’s more, 写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。