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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有

10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My father and I stayed at Bai Shan Hotel for a week when we visit Yanji last month. It is in the

downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free

high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for

my friends many photos taking in Yanji. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we

enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that l will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Yanji.

Answer 1

【答案】Last month my brother and I visited Nanjing and westayat the Central Hotel for a

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【解析】试题分析：这是一篇记叙文，讲的是作者去南京旅游，住了一家非常棒的旅馆，最爱的还是旅馆里的高速网络。并向要去南京旅游的推荐了这家旅馆。

【1】stay改成stayed考察动词时态。stay跟前面的visited属于并列成分，所以都要有过去时态。故把stay改成stayed。

【2】but改成so/and考察连词。but表示转折，用来连接前后相反的意思，但这句话明显是递进关系，或者因果关系。意思是它在市中心，所以/并且去……很方便。故把but改成so/and。

【3】去掉anywhere前面的to考察介词。anywhere是副词，副词前不加介词，故把to去掉。

【4】comfortable前加a考察冠词。comfortable double-room是名词，前面要跟a来修饰。故把comfortable前加a。

【5】That改成What考察关系代词。What I liked best was……中的What I liked best是个主语从句，what作为该从句的关系代词。故把That改成What。

【6】message改成messages考察名词。message是可数名词，并且前面有many修饰，所以用复数形式。故把message改成messages。

【7】for改成with考察介词。share with sb.固定搭配，意思是和某人分享。故把for改成with。

【8】taking改成taken考察分词做后置定语。photos taken in Nanjing是个定语从句，省略了which is, photos (which is) taken in Nanjing。故把taking改成taken。

【9】wonderfully改成wonderful考察形容词。was后面跟形容词作表语。故把wonderfully改成wonderful。

【10】me改成mine考察名词性物主代词。friend of mine，mine指的是my friend。避免重复就用物主代词mine代替。故把me改成mine。