Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们班就“高一新生是否有必要进行为期一周的军训”进行讨论。请你给你校英文报的编辑写一封电子邮件，反映你们的讨论情况。

1.支持者85％，理由…….

2.反对者15％ 理由…….

3.你的看法…….

注意：1.参考词汇 military training军训

2. 词数100左右;

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training.

Yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training. Different students hold different attitudes to it/Students’ views on it vary from person to person.

Some hold that it is necessary. On one hand, it can improve student’s teamwork spirit , which will play an important part in their life and study. On the other hand, there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training.

However, the others have opposite views. They think it is a waste of time. Besides, students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun.

As far as I’m concerned, though we may feel tired during the training , it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，你们班就“高一新生是否有必要进行为期一周的军训”进行讨论。请你给你校英文报的编辑写一封电子邮件，反映你们的讨论情况。1.支持者85％，理由…….2.反对者15％ 理由…….3.你的看法…….

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，共四段，内容齐全，结构合理，运用高级句子。on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training.介词on后面用whether引导宾语从句；it can improve student’s teamwork spirit , which will play an important part in their life and study. Which引导非限制性定语从句；there is no doubt that---，使用固定句式；As far as I’m concerned, though we may feel tired during the training , it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.划线部分的运用堪称经典；另外，On one hand, On the other hand, However, Besides,为文章增色添彩。