Question

14．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom对中国文化非常感兴趣，他和他的家人准备今年来中国过春节，写信向你咨询相关事宜．请根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件．内容包括：
1．春节在中国文化中的重要性；
2．主要的庆祝活动和方式；
3．旅游注意事项：选好参观的城市、提前预定宾馆等．
注意：1．词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during the Spring Festival．
                                        
I wish you a pleasant journey in China．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的笔友Tom对中国文化非常感兴趣，他和他的家人准备今年来中国过春节，写信向你咨询相关事宜．请根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：春节在中国文化中的重要性；主要的庆祝活动和方式；旅游注意事项：选好参观的城市、提前预定宾馆等．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：get together聚在一起；lucky money压岁钱；express our best wishes表达祝愿；Chinese culture中国文化；
 It is an occasion when family members get together and have a good rest．（高分句型一）
Before the festival，we clean our houses and decorate them with red couplets and pictures，which express our best wishes for the coming new year．（高分句型二）
Children are given lucky money in red paper．There are dragon dances and carnivals，from which you can learn more about Chinese culture．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during the Spring Festival．
       The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China．It is an occasion when family members get together and have a good rest．（高分句型一）Before the festival，we clean our houses and decorate them with red couplets and pictures，which express our best wishes for the coming new year．（高分句型二）During the festival，we visit relatives．Children are given lucky money in red paper．There are dragon dances and carnivals，from which you can learn more about Chinese culture．（高分句型三）In the north of China the special food for the Spring Festival is dumpling．
       Please decide which cities you are going to visit and book the hotel rooms in advance．
       I wish you a pleasant journey in China．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．