假定你的李华.你的外教Sharon 想找人学唱中文歌曲．你想推荐你的朋友王明教她唱歌．请你给Sharon写一封邮件.要点如下:1．简单介绍王明, 2．推荐他的两个理由．注意:1．词数100左右,2．可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯,3．开头语已为你写好.不计入总词数．Dear Sharon.I'm glad to know ．Yours.Li Hua� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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17．假定你的李华，你的外教Sharon 想找人学唱中文歌曲．你想推荐你的朋友王明教她唱歌．请你给Sharon写一封邮件，要点如下：
1．简单介绍王明；
2．推荐他的两个理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Sharon，
I'm glad to know
．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析本篇书面表达属于英文电子邮件，根据提示信息向外教推荐你的朋友王明教她唱歌，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确两个要点：简单介绍王明；推荐他的两个理由．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达．recommend推荐；get along with相处；On the one hand，On the other hand一方面…另一方面

解答【参考范文】书面表达：
Dear Sharon，
   I'm glad to know you are keen on Chinese songs and want to learn them．Here I would like to recommend my friend Wang Ming to you．
   Wang Ming，aged 17 this year，is a student in our school．（高分句型）He is honest，kind and easy to get along with．（介绍王明）On the one hand，he has a gift for singing and has taken part in many singing contests in which he performed well．Therefore，I'm sure he wil l live up to your expectations．On the other hand，his spoken English is so excellent that he has no difficulty communicating with you in English．   （高分句型）（推荐理由）
I hope my recommendation is of some help to you．
   Best wishes!
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

点评应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁．（2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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