Question

【题目】请根据下面的英文短诗展开合理想象，写一篇介绍人物的文章。标题为：My Teacher, Mr Moore。注意：词数100左右。

My Teacher, Mr Moore

There is a teacher Mr Moore，

Who is lovely and thirty－four，

Always encouraging us to try，

He leads us to a world of “why”，

We all admire him more and more.

My Teacher, Mr Moore

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Answer 1

【答案】My Teacher, Mr Moore

Of all my teachers, Mr Moore is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age.And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Compared with other teachers, Mr Moore pays more attention to his approaches of teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion, not only should we know “what”， but we should understand “why”．So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.Under his direction, we've learned how to analyze and solve problems. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的老师。本题所给材料是关于你的老师的小诗，故动笔前一定要读懂诗歌，然后结合诗歌内容适当发挥想象将诗歌内容表达完全，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，尽量不犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

本文的写作符合题目要求，内容完整，人物描写恰当。本文中的句式非常灵活多变，简单句与复合句相结合。其中复合句运用的恰当，尤其是状语从句。文中运用的句式及语法有：

定语从句Mr Moore is the one who impresses me most.和状语从句最我，由though引导的状语Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age；由whenever引导的状语从句he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions；和以及由such…that…引导的状语从句He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.。以及由what引导的感叹句What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!句中还有非谓语作状语Compared with other teachers, Mr Moore pays more attention to his approaches of teaching；还有由not only…,but also…引导的并列句运用了部分倒装：In his opinion, not only should we know “what”， but we should understand “why”。