Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

 

Answer 1

1.wanting----wanted

2.being---be

3.Hebei前the划掉

4.the 前in----from

5.good---well

6.special---specially

7.doing---do

8.Beside---Besides

9.As---It

10.I’ll后加be

【解析】

1.wanting----wanted 考查动词的被动语态。句意：我从报纸了解到，你们公司缺少员工。

2.being---be 考查固定短语。Be eager to do 迫切想做某事。

3.Hebei前the划掉 考查冠词。在省份前面不加冠词。

4.the 前in----from 考查固定短语。Graduate from 从哪毕业。

5.good---well 考查副词。Do well in 在某方面做得好；

6.especial---especially 考查副词。句意：我尤其擅长电脑与英语。

7.doing---do 考查动词的时态。句意：我能用英语阅读科学类书籍和用英语写作。And连接read与do并列。

8.Beside---Besides 考查副词。句意：况且，我也懂一点法语。

9.As---It 考查固定句型。It is said that 据说。

10.I’ll后加be 考查句子结构，句意：据说你们公司很有名，如果录取了我，会很高兴。Be glad 高兴。

考点：短文改错。