Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter想抓住中国“一带一路”经济合作战略的大好时机到中国来创业，现写信向你咨询有关事宜，请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信：

1. 你对此事的看法；

2. 给出几点建议（如：学汉语，了解中国文化等）并说明理由；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 一带一路the Belt and Road; 合作战略cooperative strategy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am more than delighted to know that you are coming to China to set up your own business. It’s really a wise choice to take advantage of the Belt and Road economic cooperation strategy of China. Here are some useful tips for you.

To begin with, you are supposed to learn some Chinese so that you can communicate with Chinese better when you are in China. Besides, it is also beneficial for you to learn about some Chinese culture and traditions, which will assist you to have a better understanding of China. Just as an old proverb goes, “When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do.” More importantly, if I were you, I would surf the Internet to get more basic information about Chinese economic policies. Only in this way can you make a specific and practical plan.

I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into account. I hope you’ll find these suggestions useful. May you succeed in your further business. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对Peter抓住中国“一带一路”经济合作战略的时机来中国来创业的看法，并给出几点建议，以及表达对Peter的祝愿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达对Peter抓住中国“一带一路”经济合作战略的时机来中国来创业的看法；

2.给出几点建议并说明理由；

3.表达对Peter的祝愿。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

set up; business; take advantage of; the Belt and Road; cooperation strategy; To begin with; be supposed to do; so that; communicate with; Besides; learn about; assist; have a better understanding of; surf the Internet; make plan; succeed in.

第三步：连词成句

1. I am more than delighted to know that you are coming to China to set up your own business.

2. It’s really a wise choice to take advantage of the Belt and Road economic cooperation strategy of China.

3. you are supposed to learn some Chinese so that you can communicate with Chinese better when you are in China.

4. it is also beneficial for you to learn about some Chinese culture and traditions, which will assist you to have a better understanding of China.

5. Just as an old proverb goes, “When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do.”

6. if I were you, I would surf the Internet to get more basic information about Chinese economic policies.

7. I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into account.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改