Question

假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的
以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一
个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I went to the supermarket, buying a toy and went to see my nephew , a 8-year-old boy named Jack. She was playing with some of his friend in the yard when I arrived there. The moment he found that I came to see him with his most favorite toy, Jack jumped with joy. Every boy and girl present wanted very much to have a look the toy. However, Jack doesn’t want his friends to see it. He was about to hide the toy then I stopped him. “Let your friends to play with your toy as well, Jack — you must learn to share.” I said. Realized that he was wrong, Jack played with the toy together with his friends.

Answer 1

【小题1】buying改为bought
【小题2】a改为 an
【小题3】She改为He
【小题4】friend改为friends
【小题5】去掉most
【小题6】look后加at
【小题7】doesn’t 改为didn’t
【小题8】then改为when
【小题9】去掉to
【小题10】Realized改为Realizing

解析试题分析：
【小题1】and连接并列谓语，所以这里应该使用一般过去式
【小题2】eight的首字母发音是元音，故用不定冠词an
【小题3】上文提到我的侄子是个八岁的男孩，所以She改为He
【小题4】some of + 名词复数，所以friend改为friends
【小题5】favorite本身意思就是最喜欢的，故去掉most
【小题6】have a look at是固定用法，意为看一眼
【小题7】整篇文章都用的是过去时态，故这里应该使用一般过去式
【小题8】这是一个时间状语从句，故应该用when
【小题9】let之后用动词原形
【小题10】分词的逻辑主语与分词动作之间是主动关系，故应该用现在分词作原因状语
考点：考查学生对词汇语法的掌握情况
点评：答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。