Question

20．假若你是二十一世纪英文报的编辑Tom，高二学生李华来信说，他即将升入高三，感觉压力大，很担心不能适应高三学习及生活．请用英文给该同学写一封回信．
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数．
Hi Li Hua，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a difficult time at present．________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给即将升入高三，感觉压力大，很担心不能适应高三学习及生活的李华写一封回信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议并说明理由．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为表示理解并给予安慰．第二部分为提出建议并说明理由．第三部分为美好祝愿．
重点短语与句型：
as follows如下
a good way of 好方法
get rid of消除
be of some help有些帮助
adapt…to 适应
高分句型一：The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don't have to worry so much..此句用了that引导的表语从句．
高分句型二：The important thing is to learn to release your pressure 此句用了不定式作表语．

解答 Hi Li Hua，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a difficult time these days．The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don't have to worry so much．（ 高分句型一）（表示理解并给予安慰）
The important thing is to learn to release your pressure （高分句型二）．Four useful tips are listed as follows．Firstly，find out which subject you are not good at and make a detailed study plan to improve it with your own effort and the teachers'help．Secondly，talk to someone you trust about how you feel．This is a good way of reducing pressure．In addition，go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is a relaxing way to get rid of stress．And finally，remain optimistic about your future．Such a positive attitude towards study can be of some help．（提出建议并说明理由）
I hope you'll soon adapt yourself to the senior three life（．美好祝愿）
Yours
Tom

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧