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8．暑假期间，你校英语外教Mr．Smith 准备在本地开一家西餐店．需招聘若干名高中生志愿者来此打工．下面是招聘启事：
Wanted!
4middle school students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Contact：wfpub@gmail．com
假定你叫李明，愿意应聘．请写封电子邮件，介绍自己，并说明你愿意应聘的理由．词数100左右．开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I happened to read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job．
                                                      
Yours sincerely
LiMing．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于书信类作文，要求写一篇应聘信，英语外教Mr．Smith 准备在本地开一家西餐店．需招聘若干名高中生志愿者来此打工，要写一封应聘信，介绍自己，说明应聘理由，要点已经给出，需要进行适当的扩展，写作内容应包括：自我介绍，应聘理由，应聘优势，结尾问候，注意使用连贯词，使作文内容连贯，审题时注意时态使用一般现在时，主语应为第一人称．
重要短语：
decide to（决定做…）；apply for（应聘）；（be good at）意为"擅长于…"；have difficulty in意为"在…有困难"；be in good health（身体健康）；help sb with sth（在某方面帮助某人）；be able to（能够做…）；look forward to（期望…）
高分句型：
1．I happened to have read your advertisement and decided to apply for the job．该句灵活运用短语，表明写信目的．
2．Although I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practice my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．本句灵活运用高级词汇及句型．
3．I would greatly appreciate it if you can employ me．本句运用虚拟语气，表达自己如果被录取的感激之情．

解答 Dear Mr Smith：I happened to have read your advertisement and decided to apply for the job．　（开篇点明写信目的）　
  I am a girl middle school student of 18 years．I am good at English．Last year，I got the first prize in our school English speaking competition．I also love communicating with others．So I am sure I won't have any difficulty in being a good translator．Besides，I'm in good health and often help my mother do housework，which will surely help me with service work．（自我介绍及优势）
  Although I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practice my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．（应聘理由）
  I would greatly appreciate it if you can employ me．
  Looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming

点评 对于英语书信类的写作要开篇点明写作目的，简明扼要地说明应聘的原因，并且写出自己的优势，要以真诚恳切的态度打动读信的人，在写作过程中要注意灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述，合理地使用过渡语和连贯词，使得整篇文章过渡自然，衔接紧密．