Question

11．假定你是李华，你将参加校学生会组织的演讲比赛，你想请你的英语老师去听你的演讲．
请你用英语写一封邀请信．内容包括：
1．邀请老师的原因：你希望英语老师能给你一些建议；
2．比赛时间和地点：下周四下午2：30，校大礼堂；
3．演讲比赛人数：12人．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计人总词数．
4．参考词汇：大礼堂auditorium
Dear Mr．Hu．
I'm Li Hua．      ．
Best wishes!
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And you know it is the first time for me to make such an important speech in public．
高分句型二：
There're 12 students who will compete in the contest，and I'm the only one in my class to attend．
句型一 you know it is the first time for me to make such…该句中有一个固定的用法：it is the first time for sb to do sth 对某人来说是第一次做某事
句型二 who will compete in the contest..该句是一个由who引导的定语从句，who在该句中作主语，替代前面的先行词students

解答 Dear Mr．Hu，
   I'm Li Hua．I'm going to make a speech in a speech contest organized by the Students'Union．And you know it is the first time for me to make such an important speech in public．（高分句型一）So，I sincerely invite you to come to see my performance and give me some advice on my speech．（提出邀请）There're 12 students who will compete in the contest，and I'm the only one in my class to attend．（高分句型二）All of my classmates will come to cheer up for me．（描述演讲情况）Would you come to the contest to be held at our school's auditorium at 2：30 next Thursday afternoon？I'm looking forward to seeing you there．
   Best wishes!
Yours，
 Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．