Question

【题目】假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：

1.付出才有回报；

2.收获自信和友谊；

3.感激之情。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已经写好，不计入总词数。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.

Firstly, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”. Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1.付出才有回报；2.收获自信和友谊；3.感激之情。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已经写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，层次清楚，结构合理。连接词的使用让文章层次分明：Firstly,，Besides，

Additionally, More importantly ，To sum up。高级句型的使用为提升了文章的档次I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”. I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot.