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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was fine and the sky was clear blue. I wanted to go somewhere excited with my roommates. Finally we decided to climb to the Great Wall. It took us one and a half hour to get there by bus. Upon arriving, we begin to climb happily, sharing stories about the Wall. After two hours of climbing, we reached the top, where we enjoyed the breathtaking scenery or took quite a few photos. See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains, both of us felt really amazed. How a wonder! As the famous saying goes, “He who has never been to the Great Wall not a true man.” I felt like I was the true man.

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【解析】

本文为记叙文。文章讲述了我和我的室友们一起去爬上长城的事情。

1．考查形容词。excited（兴奋的）主要表达人对事物的感受，此处作后置定语修饰somewhere，表示事物本身所具有的性质或特征，应该用形容词exciting。故将excited改为exciting。

2．考查介词。climb是及物动词，后面直接带宾语，介词to是多余的。故去掉to。

3．考查名词的数。one and a half 修饰复数名词，故将hour改为hours。

4．考查动词的时态。本文整体时态为过去式，讲述过去发生的事，此处英语整体时态一致。故将begin改为began。

5．"我们欣赏了令人叹为观止的景色"与"拍了不少照片"之间为并列关系而不是选择关系．故将or改为and。

6．考查非谓语动词。See the Great wall wind its way over the mountains这一部分在句子中作状语，且动词see与主语之间为主动关系，应该用现在分词．故将See改为Seeing。

7．考查代词。both是"两者都"，从前面看I和my roommates应该指三人以上，用代词all。故将both改为all．

8．考查感叹句。how通常修饰形容词或副词，a wonder是名词，修饰名词应该用what．故将How改为What。

9．考查句子结构。本句中he作主语，who has never been to the Great Wall 作定语修饰代词he，缺少谓语动词，故在not前加is。

10．考查冠词。定冠词the表特指，此处true man是泛指概念，应用不定冠词a。故将the改为a。