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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.

It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

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【答案】I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I

paid

needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these

that their

parents have difficult supporting their families.

difficulty

It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make∧

去掉more However a

living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our

are

problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

financially making

【解析】作者以自己的经历鼓励年轻人要自食其力，不要过分依靠父母。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以pay改成paid。

考查固定句型。it shocks me that让我震惊的是……，是固定句型，所以what改成that。

考查代词。让我震惊的是，有些人已经20多岁了，但是仍然由他们的父母养活他们。所以our改成their。

考查固定句型。have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难，是固定句型，所以difficult改成difficulty。

考查固定用法。much直接修饰比较级，所以去掉more。

考查语义理解。然而，有许多可以靠我们自己谋生的方法。所以Therefore改成However。

考查固定短语。make a living谋生，是固定短语，所以living前加a。

考查主谓一致。主语our parents是复数，所以is改成 are。

考查副词。修饰形容词responsible，用副词，所以financial改成 financially。

考查非谓语动词。make与其逻辑主语We之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词，made改成making。