Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

At the age of ten, I had a experience visiting a local American family with my parents. The family, the Smiths, which lived in a small village, led quite a simple and comfortable life. They were busy working in their fields during the day, and went to bed early at night, tiring after a long day's hard work. On weekends, they usually held small family get－togethers, dancing and drinking to celebrate the happy days they ever had. Beside, people in the family were all very warm and enthusiastic. They did his best to treat us，making us feel at home. We really had funs together talking and laughing. As a matter of fact, they were eager to learn about Chinese culture and custom, especial Chinese food. They said Chinese food was a more balanced diet, containing much fiber, and less fat. Much to our delight, they promised to visit China in next year.

Answer 1

【答案】At the age of ten, I had experience visiting a local American family with my parents. The family, the Smiths, lived in a small village, led quite a simple and comfortable life. They were busy working in their fields during the day, and went to bed early at night, after a long day's hard work. On weekends, they usually held small family get－togethers, dancing and drinking to celebrate the happy days they ever had.， people in the family were all very warm and enthusiastic. They did best to treat us，making us feel at home. We really had together talking and laughing. As a matter of fact, they were eager to learn about Chinese culture and custom, Chinese food. They said Chinese food was a more balanced diet, containing fiber, and less fat. Much to our delight, they promised to visit China next year.

【解析】这篇文章介绍了作者在十岁时，和父母去美国拜访当地一家人的经历。

考查冠词。experience首字母发音是元音，所以a改成an。

考查定语从句。who lived in a small village是一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指人，所以which改成who。

考查v+ed形式。V+ed修饰人，而v+ing修饰物，这里修饰人，所以tired改成tiring。

考查时态。表示过去的过去，用过去完成时，所以ever之前加had。

考查语义理解。此外这个家里的人们都非常温暖和热情。所以beside改成besides。

考查代词。他们尽他们最大的努力，让我们感觉像在家里一样。所以his改成their。

考查固定短语。have fun玩儿的开心，是固定短语，所以funs改成fun。

考查副词。特别是中国食物，这里应该使用副词，所以especial改成especially。

考查比较级。包含更多的纤维，更少的脂肪。由less fat可知，这里应该使用比较级，所以much改成more。