Question

【题目】假如你是高一新生李华，来到学校已经三个多月了。现在请你给在北京大学读书的哥哥写一封信，告诉他你的在校情况并请哥哥分享他的高中学习经验。

说明：1.主要内容：对哥哥的问候，你的在校情况（生活、学习等方面），你的请求。

2.字数要求：100—120（信头已经给出，不计入总词数）。

3.写作要求：内容齐全，行文流畅。

My dear elder brother,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】My dear elder brother,

How are things going? It is more than three months since I came to the new school, where I have learned how to live together with others and how to get along well with all my classmates and teachers as well. I am very happy to be admitted into the Student Union and I am the student in charge of English in my class. In the last two monthly examinations, I did quite well, especially in Chinese and English, ranking No. 66 in Senior One. As you know, it is not my goal. So I have made up my mind to work harder. Of course I need your help. Could you please share your learning experience in science subjects?

Waiting for your reply.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是请你给在北京大学读书的哥哥写一封信，告诉他你的在校情况并请哥哥分享他的高中学习经验。主要内容：对哥哥的问候；你的在校情况（生活、学习等方面）；你的请求。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。It is more than three months since I came to the new school, where I have learned how to live together with others and how to get along well with all my classmates句中since引导时间状语从句，where引导定语从句；I did quite well, especially in Chinese and English, ranking No. 66 in Senior One.现在分词做伴随状态；As you know, it is not my goal.as引导非限制性定语从句。