Question

3．假如你是李华，某中学高二学生，面对目前的学习压力，想和父母说说知心话，请你用英语在你的博客上用书信的形式表达出来．要点如下：
1．感恩
2．期望：（1）．多交流，使自己保持良好心态 （2）．创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助
3．打算：考生自拟（至少写两点）
注意：1．短文需包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥
2.100 字左右，开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数．
Dear Mom and Dad，
The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
           ．
I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．
Yours ever，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时要写清要点，用第一人称来叙述．文章介绍的是一般事实，要用现在时态为主．
重点短语和高分句型
unselfish help无私的帮助
make progress取得进步
do sb a lot of good给某人带来很大好处
be aware of清楚明白
It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．
before连接时间状语从句，表示不久…就…；which连接非限制性定语从句，修饰整个句子内容．
I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects．
so that连接目的状语从句．
If possible，as a family member，I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit．
if连接省略句，表示条件．

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
      The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
    Through those years of my growing up，I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish help，care and love for me．Thanks to your constant encouragement，I have been making progress in my studies．It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．【高分句型一】I need frequent support．As you know，good studying conditions and timely help will do me a lot of good．
    Mom and Dad，my dream is the very one you always have．I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing．I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects．【高分句型二】It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit．If possible，as a family member，I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit．【高分句型三】
    I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．
 
                                                            Yours ever，
                                                             Li  Hua

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．