Question

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1.本人简介；    2.求助内容；    3.约定时间；  

4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678）

注意：

1.词数100左右；  2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；  3.结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

                                                                                     

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                     

Look forward to your reply.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no lessons on Tuesday mornigs and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here are my e-mail address and phone number: Email:lihua@126.com; Phone:12345678

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必须按照要求在作文中覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点，完成试题任务，达到预期的写作目的。在写作时，考生应该留心是否要点完整，是否有要点遗漏。在题示要点完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料为中心进行适当地发挥，适当补充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。在信中注意写作的语气及时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如taking summer courses, ask for help, I have some difficulties with, Look forward to your reply， I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.还运用了Here are my e-mail address and phone number倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：But；and等等。

考点：提纲作文。