Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

(2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed a accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.

Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.

Answer 1

【答案】1.on去掉

2.bad→badly

3.Under→With

4.a→the

5.drinking →drunk

6.think →thought

7.Which →As

8.在lose前加上to

9.accident →accidents

10.prevent→should prevent或prevented

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在回家的路上，目睹了一起醉酒驾驶导致的交通事故。

1.考查介词。句意：不幸的是，昨晚我在回家的路上看到了一起交通事故。固定用法“last/next+时间”作状语，其前不需要介词，故将on去掉。

2.考查副词。hurt是过去分词，其前需用副词修饰，故将bad改为badly。

3.考查介词。固定短语with the help of...表示“在……的帮助下”，句首单词首字母应大写，故将Under改为With。

4.考查冠词。accident为可数名词，此处特指前面一提到了醉酒驾车造成事故，应用定冠词，故将a改为the。

5.考查形容词。固定短语be drunk“喝醉”，故将drinking改为drunk。

6.考查时态。此故事发生在过去，应用一般过去时，故将think 改为thought。

7.考查定语从句。句意：正如新闻报道所报道的那样，醉酒驾驶应该被严肃对待。此处为as引导非限定性定语从句，位于句首代替主句中的整个内容，常用结构为As is reported“据报道……”，which不可以放置于句首。故将Which 改为As。

8.考查非谓语动词。句意：它经常导致许多人失去生命，例如发生在杭州和成都的事故。cause表示“使，迫使”的意思时，一般接不定式的复合结构作宾语，即cause sb. to do sth.“造成某人做某事”。故在lose前加上to。

9. 考查名词。accident事故，是可数名词。此处表示广州和深圳的事故应用复数形式，故将accident 改为accidents。

10.考查虚拟语气。句意：我们早该阻止酒后驾车了。It is high time that+clause是虚拟语气的一种，从句中的动词应是should+动词原形或动词的一般过去式，故将prevent改为should prevent或prevented。