Question

【题目】假如你是校英语口语俱乐部的主席李华，你们俱乐部准备本周末去新星农场远足，请你用英语写一则通知，要求如下：

1.周六早上八点在学校门口集合，下午六点返回；

2.自备水和午餐；

3.穿戴合适的衣物；

4.周五前报名。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Notice

To get close to nature and experience life in the countryside, a hike to New Star farm will be organized this Saturday. Here are the dos and don’ts.

We’ll get together at 8 a.m. at the school gate, after which we will go there bu bus. We’ll have an hour’s ride to get to the farm, where we can learn to do some farm work, such as picking peanuts and feeding chickens. Do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes. And you’d better wear a hat in case you get burnt. Besides, don’t forget to bring adequate drinking water as well as lunch with you, for we’ll stay there till 6 p.m.

I do believe it is a meaningful activity. Whoever wants to take part, please sign up before Friday. Hope all of you can enjoy yourselves there!

【解析】

本文为应用文。口头通知主要分三段：　第一段通知的目的；第二段通知的内容；第三段，注意事项。这种文体常用被动形式。通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动，时态以一般将来时为主交替使用一般将来时的形式。will/be going to /shall

本文结构合理，内容完整，语言通顺。主动语态与被动语态相结合。句中使用了一些较高级的词汇如：get close to，adequate，sign up。及表示顺序连词and, besides等，使文章自然、流畅。文中运用了非谓语（To get close to nature and experience life in the countryside,…）。句式灵活多变，既有定语从句（We’ll have an hour’s ride to get to the farm, where we can learn to do some farm work），状语从句（And you’d better wear a hat in case you get burnt）；主语从句（Whoever wants to take part, please sign up before Friday）；并列句（don’t forget to bring adequate drinking water as well as lunch with you, for we’ll stay there till 6 p.m.）又有祁使句（Do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes.和don’t forget to bring adequate drinking wate），还有用助动词do进行强调的强调句型（I do believe it is a meaningful activity.）从而增加文章的档次。