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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

Answer 1

【答案】①go改为went；②ours改为our；③去掉so；④Before改为After；⑤impatiently改为impatient；⑥and改为but；⑦were改为was；⑧and 后加 a；⑨ minute改为minutes；⑩Felt改为 Feeling。

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了一次和祖父去钓鱼的经历。
①考查时态。根据前面的时间One Sunday morning判定，用一般过去时。
②考查代词。充当定语修饰名词必须用形容词性物主代词。故将ours改为our。
③考查句子结构。前面是从句,此处是主句,不需要使用连词连接。去掉so。
④考查介词。句意：等了大约半个小时以后，我开始不耐烦了。故将Before改为After。
⑤考查形容词。此处get是系动词,后跟形容词作表语构成系表结构。将impatiently改为impatient。
⑥ 考查连词。根据上下文判断,此处应该是转折。句意：我想要放弃，但是爷爷告诉我再多等一会。故将and改为but。
⑦考查主谓一致。there be句型的主语是a sudden pull,故用单数形式。故将were改为was。
⑧考查冠词。此处指一条鱼,表泛指,故用a。
⑨考查名词单复数。在接下来的几分钟里,故用复数形式。故将minute改为minutes
⑩考查非谓语动词。因为动词feel与句子主语we构成主动关系，使用现在分词用作原因状语。句意：感觉饿了，我们在湖边升起了篝火烤鱼。味道好极了！