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5．The"Clean Your Plate"campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists，which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table．The campaign，launched on Weibo，was soon joined by millions of netizens across China to fight against food waste．
The estimated annual waste of grain in China reaches 50million tons，enough to feed about 200million people for a year．
People from across China support the campaign．The Central Government has promised to take measures to reduce food waste，take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style．
More and more Chinese are saying"No"to food waste．Staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in Qingdao，Shandong province，Jan.24．"Did you empty the dishes today？"has become the most popular question in China．Showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among Chinese netizens．
In some restaurants there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food．Some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food，as part of the campaign to reduce waste．More and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away．
[写作内容]
1）以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2）以约120个词就"光盘行动"的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
①"光盘行动"产生的背景；
②"光盘行动"的作用；
③你对"光盘行动"的看法和呼求．
[写作要求]
1）作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．
When some people started the"Clean Your Plate"campaign in an effort to reduce food waste，millions of netizens joined it and more and more people are taking real action to prevent food waste．
I'm quite delighted by this campaign．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．Unfortunately，I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste．It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．What an alarming waste it is!We should feel guilty to waste so much food．
It is high time for us to stop such waste．There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals．If all people take action to cut down food waste，a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed．
The"Clean Your Plate"campaign is really good and useful．Let's join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：in an effort to do （努力做某事），take action to do（采取措施做某事），be delighted by sth（因…高兴），worry about（担心），suffer from（遭受…），feel guilty （觉得羞愧），cut down（削减），a large quantity of（大量地），waste food（浪费食物），join in （参加），eat up（吃光），instead of（代替）．
【高分句型一】
1．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．
此处是由连词"while"引导的让步状语从句，主句为"millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day"，"while"意为"尽管"．
【高分句型二】
1．①Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，②there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．
①此处是由连词"though"引导的让步状语从句，主句为"there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach"．
②此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"others"，关系代词"who"在从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
2．①It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，②which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．
①此处是主语从句，结构为"It+be+过去分词+that+…"．
 ②此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 When some people started the"Clean Your Plate"campaign in an effort to reduce food waste，millions of netizens joined it and more and more people are taking real action to prevent food waste．（概括）
I'm quite delighted by this campaign．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．【高分句型一】Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．【高分句型二】Unfortunately，I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste．It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．【高分句型三】What an alarming waste it is!We should feel guilty to waste so much food．（"光盘行动"产生的背景）
 It is high time for us to stop such waste．There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals．If all people take action to cut down food waste，a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed．（"光盘行动"的作用）
 The"Clean Your Plate"campaign is really good and useful．Let's join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food．（个人观点：对"光盘行动"的看法和呼求）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．