Question

12．假设你是李华，与朋友Bob约好要在星期日一起去游泳，但是因故不能赴约．请你给他写封信，内容包括：
1．对不能赴约表示歉意；
2．说明不能赴约的原因（原因自拟）；
3．另约时间及碰头地点去游泳．（时间及碰头地点自拟）
注意：1．词数100左右．  2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Bob，
To tell the truth，it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise．（高分句型一）Now I'm writing to apologize to you for what I will do．
I have just received a phone call from my cousin saying that she will come to visit me this Sunday．Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown，I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon．（高分句型二）Therefore，I can't spare time to go swimming with you．As for this．I'm terribly sorry and I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble．
I wonder if you are free next Sunday afternoon．If so，we can go early so that we'll have time to see a film together after swimming．We can meet at the school gate at 2 o'clock．If it's OK for you，please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，与朋友Bob约好要在星期日一起去游泳，但是因故不能赴约．请你给他写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：对不能赴约表示歉意；说明不能赴约的原因（原因自拟）；另约时间及碰头地点去游泳．（时间及碰头地点自拟）
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：To tell the truth实话说；keep my promise遵守承诺；Due to由于；is familiar with 对…熟悉；Therefore因此；As for 至于；ahead of 提前；
To tell the truth，it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise．（高分句型一）
Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown，I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon．（高分句型二）
If it's OK for you，please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
       To tell the truth，it's really exciting to go swimming with you on Sunday afternoon but I'm afraid that I can't keep my promise．（高分句型一）Now I'm writing to apologize to you for what I will do．
       I  have just received a phone call from my cousin saying that she will come to visit me this Sunday．Due to the fact that she is not familiar with my hometown，I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon．（高分句型二）Therefore，I can't spare time to go swimming with you．As for this．I'm terribly sorry and I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble．
       I wonder if you are free next Sunday afternoon．If so，we can go early so that we'll have time to see a film together after swimming．We can meet at the school gate at 2 o'clock．If it's OK for you，please let me know ahead of time or you can suggest another time．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．