Question

19．Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
复旦大学一研究生因平时琐事和同学不和，在寝室饮用水里投毒，导致一室友死亡．作为即将踏入大学校门的你，谈谈和同学和谐相处的重要性以及你的一些建议．
注意：1．词数不少于120个；
2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称，
3．文章开头已给出，不计入字数．
A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommates for trivial．So he put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommate for trivial．He put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．（高分句型一）There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious campus life．The first thing to do is to communicate，which brings a better understanding among classmates．What's more，you'll have to share with each other．Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates，and your relationship will be much closer．Most important of all，you should learn to tolerate and be considerate．Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college．（高分句型二）
In conclusion，getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important．A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together．An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others'．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．关于如何与同学和睦相处这个问题已经引起了许多即将进入大学生活的高三学生的广泛关注．
高分句型二：Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college
只有这样，你才能在大学里和同学一起度过快乐的日子．
句型一 who are on the way to college．使用了定语从句，对学生进行修饰限制．
句型二 Only in this way can you live a happy life…此处使用了倒装句式，当only位于句首修饰介词短语时
另外还使用了大量的衔接过渡词句，如：the first thing、What's more、most important of all和In conclusion等使语言更加连贯．

解答 A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommate for trivial．He put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．（高分句型一）There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious campus life．The first thing to do is to communicate，which brings a better understanding among classmates．What's more，you'll have to share with each other．Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates，and your relationship will be much closer．Most important of all，you should learn to tolerate and be considerate．Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college．（高分句型二）
In conclusion，getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important．A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together．An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others'．

点评 本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息来介绍自己的看法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．