Question

5．现在学生的视力下降是较为普遍的现象，请以"How to Protect Eyesight"为题写一篇100字左右的短文如下：
1．分析视力下降的原因：如看书时间过长，在弱光下读书，经常使用电脑等．
2．提出至少两条保护视力的建议．
可以适当的增加内容，开头已经给出，不计入总数．
How to Protect Eyesight
Nowadays many students wear glasses because they are short-sighted．It is a common phenomenon that more and more students，are declining．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们以"How to Protect Eyesight"为题写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：分析视力下降的原因：如看书时间过长，在弱光下读书，经常使用电脑等．提出至少两条保护视力的建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为总体介绍现状．第二部分为分析视力下降的原因及建议．第三部分为最后的呼吁
重点短语与句型：
In my view从我的观点来看
do harm to 对…有害
be addicted to 沉溺于…
take actions to采取行动
高分句型一：It is a common phenomenon that more and more students′eyesights are declining..此句用了it作形式主语，真正主语是that从句
高分句型二：Besides，I suggest we not study in the weak light and not keep our eyes close to the books．此句用了suggest虚拟语气，should 可省略
高分句型三：What is more，some students are addicted to playing computers，which is also quite harmful此句用了定语从句．

解答 How to Protect Eyesight
Nowadays many students wear glasses because they are short-sighted．It is a common phenomenon that more and more students′eyesights are declining（高分句型一）．（总体介绍现状）
In my view，eyes are windows of our hearts．Therefore，it is a problem that we must pay much attention to．First，reading too long time can do harm to our eyesight．We′d better have a break and have a look at the distance after half an hour′s reading．Besides，I suggest we not study in the weak light and not keep our eyes close to the books（高分句型二）．What is more，some students are addicted to playing computers，which is also quite harmful（高分句型三）．The eye exercises are good ways to relax our eyes．If possible，we are supposed to get more sleep so that our eyes can get more rest．（分析视力下降的原因及建议）
Why not take actions to protect our eyes and see a bright and clear world？Come on．（最后的呼吁）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．