Question

4．你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信．他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见．请根据下列提示回信：
1．建议他回国；
2．你的理由是：学有所用，就业容易；照顾父母．
注意；1．词数100左右．
  2．行文应连贯，内容应完整．
3．开头语与落款已为你写好．
June 8th
Dear Jianhua，
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago．I've been thinking about the question you asked me．（高分句型）In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies abroad．（建议回国）For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．（高分句型）It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．（高分句型）In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．（高分句型）（回国理由）Therefore，I think it's a good idea for you to return．So what are you waiting for？
Best wishes，
Minghua．

Answer 1

分析 本文在文字提示里只是给出部分的要点，具体需要我们做详细说明．在建议回国的理由方面，可以从学有所用；中国的发展给海归人士提供更好的发展平台，更好的机遇．国内的经济发展良好等方面展开做具体说明．要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力．
  亮点说明   范文要点全面，语言简洁但也不乏好的词组和句型：in my opinion 在我看来；hope to 希望做…；I've been thinking about the question you asked me．这句话用了定语从句；For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．这句使用了主语从句；It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．这句话用了it作形式主语；For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．这句话用了it作形式主语和as引导的原因状语从句．

解答 June 8th
Dear Jianhua，
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago．I've been thinking about the question you asked me．（高分句型）In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies abroad．（建议回国）For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．（高分句型）It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．（高分句型）In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．（高分句型）（回国理由）Therefore，I think it's a good idea for you to return．So what are you waiting for？
 Best wishes，
                                                               Minghu

点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．