Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的朋友李明英语口语不好，他来信征求你的意见。请你给他写一封回信，提出以下的看法和建议：

1. 不要失去信心，不要怕出错，不要怕被别人嘲笑；

2. 争取在课内外尽可能多讲英语，孰能生巧；

3. 多与老师交流，找老师问学习方法；

4. 可以交个外国网友，通过网络用英语交流。

注意：

1. 词数：100左右

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Ming,

I’m glad to hear from you. Here are some suggestions on how to learn English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I’m glad to hear from you. Here are some suggestions on how to learn English.

To my point of the view, what matters most in learning English is that you should be always confident. Instead of being afraid of making mistakes or being laughed at, you have to overcome your shyness and catch every opportunity to speak English both in and after class as much as possible, as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” What’s more important, you should turn to teachers for help and ask their advice for good learning methods, which will let you make great progress. With the development of new technology, computer makes it possible to make friends with the native speakers through the Internet, and you should make the most of it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

亮点说明：本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。主语从句的使用：what matters most in learning English is that you should be always confident.习语的使用：“Practice makes perfect.”非限制性定语从句的使用：you should turn to teachers for help and ask their advice for good learning methods, which will let you make great progress.形式宾语it的使用：computer makes it possible to make friends with the native speakers through the Internet。连接词的使用：To my point of the view, What’s more important。