Question

9．53年前，毛主席题词"向雷锋同志学习"，并把3月5日定为学雷锋纪念日，最近你班学生就此话题展开讨论：现代社会还要学雷锋吗？请你为校刊写稿，发表自己观点．注意：1词数：100左右；
2语言通顺，结构严谨．
                                           

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇讨论关于雷锋精神是否已经过时的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一人们对学雷锋活动的质疑；二雷锋精神的时代性；三自己的观点．
高分句型：
1．To them nothing is more important than those things，which is often regarded as the views of the present generation．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句． is often regarded as 表示"被看做"．
对他们来说没有什么比那些东西更重要了，这种看法被看做是目前这一代人的观点．
2．There are some other voices  that the spirit of Lei Feng still has an enormous echo in millions of Chinese people．句子里 that 引导同位语从句，说明some other voices  的内容．
还有人认为雷锋精神仍旧在我国人民中有很大的共鸣．

解答 53years ago，the chairman of China called on everybody to learn from Leifeng．However，there are some voices claiming Lei Feng's spirit has gone out of style in today's society．They think that economy people should seek more practical things，such as fame，money and the comfortable life．To them nothing is more important than those things，which is often regarded as the views of the present generation．【高分句型一】（人们对学雷锋活动的质疑）
There are some other voices  that the spirit of Lei Feng still has an enormous echo in millions of Chinese people．【高分句型二】The great soldier's story has such a strong influence on people's ideas，values and ways of life that in every field of society there arise countless"Living Lei Fengs"，who follow the example of Lei Feng and serve the people heart and soul．（雷锋精神的时代性）
In my opinion，the spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date．Instead，it has been brought forward．Today more and more"Lei Fengs"are coming forth from various circles．The spirit of Lei Feng---an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward．（自己的观点）

点评 考查开放性作文．
开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．