Question

以Smoking Is Harmful为题，写一篇60-80词的短文，分析现状、原因，列举吸烟的害处，劝告人不要吸烟，要戒烟等。 参考词汇：对……有害处do harm to/be harmful to戒烟stop smoking/give up smoking

Smoking Is Harmful

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Answer 1

Smoking Is Harmful

When you are in public places, you will see many smokers. And most of them are young people and even middle school students. It is said that in China smokers cover about 45 percent.

Why do so many people enjoy smoking? Some people think it is a pleasure, some believe that it can refresh them. In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It does great harm to our health, not only to the smoker himself, but also to others. For smokers, it is a great waste of money, and causes all kinds of diseases .Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers.

Today, more and more people are beginning to realise the harm of smoking and decide to give it up. If you are not a smoker, don't start.

【解析】

试题分析：对于谈观点的文章，注意观点要明确，可以用一些连词，介词或动词词组等，如not only…but also…，even，in fact, besides，decide to，begin to 开始做…….决定做……对……有害处do harm to/be harmful to戒烟stop smoking/give up smoking。注意题目所给的信息，不可遗漏，必要时可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时和一般将来时。结构上：可采取总分模式。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】When you are in public places, you will see many smokers. 时间状语从句，提升文章档次。It is said that in China smokers cover about 45 percent.用确切的数字，是文章更有说服力。Why do so many people enjoy smoking? 提出疑问，引出后文，是行文更流畅。Some people think it is a pleasure, some believe that it can refresh them. not only to the smoker himself, but also to others.分别举例说明，层次，逻辑更加清晰，突出重点。.Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers.增加文章的可信度。Today, more and more people are beginning to realise the harm of smoking and decide to give it up.写明现状，具有号召性。 If you are not a smoker, don't start. if 引导的条件状语从句，提升文章档次。

考点：考查议论文的写作。