Question

13．请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文．
Winners are not those who never fail but those who never give up．
注意：①无须写标题；             ②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合具体事例；   ④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 题目要求根据英文提示并结合事例写一篇短文．提示语的意思是"成功者不是从不失败，而是从不放弃．如果我们成为一个成功的人，我们就必须做好充分的准备，不怕失败，不放弃"．作文不需写标题，不得照抄提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；不得出现个人姓名和学校名称；词数在120词左右；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性．
亮点说明：
高分句型一：
If they give up in face of failure，they will definitely not win in the end
如果他们放弃面对失败，他们绝对不会赢得最终的胜利．
高分句型二：
However，he didn't lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end．
但是，他没有灰心，坚持自己的梦想，直到他最终成为一个成功的首席执行官．
范文使用了一些固定短语：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，丰富了作文的内容．

解答 There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do，but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win．If they give up in face of failure，they will definitely not win in the end（高分句型一）．
Mayun will never forget his experience．Twenty years ago，when he tried to find a job，he found the door to success closed before him one after another，just because of his bad-looking appearance．However，he didn't lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end（高分句型二）．
In conclusion，failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner，so never give up and keep on going until you win．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．